Friday, October 16, 2009
Character 2
The second character in this book is Julianna Baker. . She has long brown hair. She lives with her mom, dad, two brothers, and a dog. She raises chickens in her back yard that she won the science fair with from one of her teachers. There are six hens. She has had them for two years. They live in a homemade chicken coop, and Julie is the only one that takes care of them. She sells her chicken eggs for money from her neighbors, and gives some to Bryce every week. She gets very good grades in school. She also likes to hang out at the big sycamore tree. She likes to feel the wind go through her hair. Her brothers have a big snake that eats eggs and whole rats. Her brothers also have a band. They play the guitar and drums. They also like to hang out with Bryce’s sister. She also has a retarded uncle that lives in a mental hospital. He is her dad’s brother. He was born retarded because he had his umbilical cord wrapped around his neck at birth. Both of her parents work to support her uncle. She lives across the street from the Loski’s. That is everything about Julianna Baker.
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She sounds like a very interesting character, but i think you need to break this up into more individual paragraphs. you kind of bounce back and forth between characters and it was a little hard for me to follow.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds very good! You did a good job of describing the things she does, but maybe not her apperence and personality enough. It was written very well, but hard to imagine this paragraph met standards! Good job anyways!(:
ReplyDeleteI think you should of done a little less of the "basic material" about Julianna. Instead put some things about why she did all those different activities. Like how come she enjoys chickens so much?
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