What choices has the main character had to make?
The main character has had to make the choice of whether or not she should go into town and possibly get caught by the army, or stay in her cave and probably die of starvation. Sarah went into town anyway and didn’t get caught because there were no army people there. So she went into town and got herself some more supplies and food. I agree with her choice to leave her cave and go get some supplies, without them she would have probably died. Another choice she had to make was whether or not to go to this meeting with this guy. So the day after she went into town to get her stuff, she went to this meeting with this guy she bought her stuff from. While she was leaving this meeting, someone took her and put her in jail to keep her safe from the bad people coming after her that thought she was a witch. The guy that brought her to the meeting came and got her and they went to another meeting and she told them she was not a witch. They thought Sarah was a witch, because since she went to that town they had been having a drought. In the end though it rained and they didn’t kill her or drag her out of town. I probably wouldn’t have made the same choice as her, because she didn’t really know what the meeting was about in the first place, and she really didn’t know the guy she was going with to. So if I was her I wouldn’t have really trusted him and I wouldn’t have gone.
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You've chosen a good focus and stayed true to it. Nice work there - now read what you've wrote and eliminate your repetitive comments-- things like "she went into town" and "meet this guy" Most times, these things can be said just once, to make what you say, have more impact.
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